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Altered Plans (Chapter 24: The Final Shape)

Bryony arrived without Kit, although he was supposed to be waiting outside when she finished.

“He’ll be late,” she said, putting her bag on the chair. “He’s at work.”

Something in the last three words suggested that work had acquired responsibility for more than his absence. Coralie opened the blue cotton bag and let Bryony see the dress before asking anything else.

The younger woman’s expression changed.

“Oh.”

It was the sound Coralie liked best: not praise yet, not even a complete opinion. The first unguarded response, before a client remembered the questions she had brought.

The ivory silk caught the light from the window. With the extra volume removed, it no longer looked as though it was waiting for a different body. The neckline was Bryony’s choice; the movement in the skirt belonged to the way she walked. Coralie had replaced the small discolored section of lining after the agreed repair, and the inside lay smooth and clean. The handstitched initials remained where they had always been.

“Shall we?” she asked.

Bryony nodded and disappeared behind the curtain.

Coralie waited outside, answering a question about where to put a hand and then another about the fastening. She did not hover. When Bryony stepped out, she was holding herself very straight, as though she had been told not to disturb the result.

“Walk,” Coralie said. “It’s allowed.”

Bryony took three small steps.

“Like you.”

This time she crossed the room at her usual pace, turned, and looked back at the mirror. The skirt followed, settling around her with a quiet movement that made Coralie’s throat tighten.

“That’s it,” Bryony said.

She put her hands at her waist, then dropped them, then turned again.

Bryony bent one knee and swung the skirt, watching it settle.

They checked the movement, the comfort when she sat, the way the dress settled when she stood again. Coralie made one small note. The work remaining was modest, and she told Bryony so. They would keep the July twenty-seventh pickup appointment for the final check and collection. Until then the dress would remain here, safe in its bag.

Bryony nodded. “Good. I don’t trust our closet. Kit’s suit’s already being bullied by the vacuum cleaner.”

Coralie asked her to take another turn, this time without looking at the mirror. Bryony obeyed, then stopped near the window and lifted her face toward the light. From that angle the dress looked less like an object being assessed and more like clothing somebody might live an entire important day inside.

“Can I dance in it?” she asked.

“You should find out.”

“Now?”

“Unless you’ve brought a written description of your dancing.”

Bryony made a face, then took two uncertain steps and turned. Her arms remained stiff at her sides.

“That’s walking with ambition,” Coralie said.

“I don’t know what we’ll do. Kit’s worse than I am.”

“Then you’ll match.”

Bryony laughed. She moved again, less carefully, and the skirt answered exactly as Coralie had hoped. She swayed, turned too quickly, and caught herself with a hand on the wall. Her laugh changed, becoming the one Coralie had heard beside the lake.

“Yes,” she said. “I can.”

Coralie stood well out of the way. Bryony tried the turn again, this time keeping her hand off the wall.

When she stopped, Bryony asked about the leftover lace.

“Safe,” Coralie said. “I’ll give you the packet when you collect the dress.”

“I was thinking of putting a little on the bouquet. Not all of it. Just a strip.”

“That could be lovely.”

“Would it be too much? The dress as well?”

Coralie considered before answering. “Do you want it there?”

“Yes.”

“Then I don’t think you’ll mind seeing it.”

Bryony looked down at her empty hands as though she were holding the flowers already. “I don’t want everything to be about her. Then I feel awful for thinking that.”

Coralie kept her voice quiet. “You can want your wedding.”

The younger woman nodded, but not as though a sentence had solved it. She rubbed one finger over another and asked where the packet would be kept. Coralie showed her the labeled place in the cabinet without opening it. Bryony seemed reassured by the ordinary answer.

“I’ll probably change my mind twice,” she said.

“You can. It’s yours.”

“About the lace. Not the dress. I’m keeping the dress.”

Coralie smiled. “I had hoped.”

They looked at the appointment card together, checking the time on the twenty-seventh. Bryony put it into her phone herself and asked Coralie to send the remaining balance again so she could arrange it before pickup. She wanted that finished before the last two days, she said, when she expected to forget her own name. Coralie promised to send it that afternoon.

Her phone vibrated. She read the message, and the tension returned to her mouth.

“He’s here,” she said. “Can I change first?”

“Of course.”

Coralie went to the front door. Kit stood on the sidewalk holding his phone, looking as though he would rather be underneath a vehicle. She told him Bryony would be a few minutes. He asked if he could wait inside. She indicated the chair farthest from the fitting curtain and began putting away the things she no longer needed.

Behind the curtain, a hanger scraped against the rail.

“You could have answered,” Bryony said.

Kit looked toward the curtain. “I couldn’t hear it.”

“You answered the other message.”

“At lunch.”

Coralie became intensely interested in a drawer. She could hear, without wanting to, how long the argument had been waiting for this room.

Bryony came out in her ordinary clothes. “You don’t have to do the speech the way Dad thinks. I said that.”

“It isn’t about your dad.”

“Then tell me what it is about.”

“Not here.”

They both looked at Coralie.

She held the hanger with the dress over one arm. “I can give you a few minutes while I put this away. Or you can talk somewhere else.”

“Sorry,” Kit said.

Bryony folded her arms. “We’re not shouting.”

“I didn’t say you were.”

That came out firmer than Coralie intended. Bryony flushed. Coralie resisted softening it into reassurance that would leave them exactly where they were. She carried the dress behind the curtain and carefully returned it to the blue bag.

Their voices dropped, but the room was small.

“I don’t want everyone looking at me while I try to make you cry,” Kit said.

“That’s not what I want.”

“You keep sending me videos of people doing it.”

A silence followed.

Coralie zipped the bag slowly. She had watched wedding videos herself once, choosing other people’s successful emotions as though they were items on a menu. She did not need to tell Bryony that. She hung the dress on its proper rail and checked that the bag cleared the floor.

“I liked what they said,” Bryony answered at last. “I didn’t mean you had to do it like that.”

“I don’t know how to do it like anything.”

Coralie came out. Kit was staring at his hands. Bryony had sat beside him, leaving a little space between their chairs.

“We’re going,” Bryony said. “Sorry.”

“Your dress is nearly ready,” Coralie told her. “That’s what we needed to do today.”

Bryony looked toward the curtain. Her shoulders lowered.

“It really is mine now.”

“Yes,” Coralie said.

Coralie saw Kit look from his fiancée to the closed curtain. He waited, his thumb rubbing the edge of his car key. Bryony noticed him waiting and moved her chair back with her foot so he had room to pass.

Kit stood. “I can’t wait to see it.”

Bryony glanced at him, and something moved in her face that had nothing to do with winning the argument.

“Good,” she said quietly.

They left together. They were not holding hands, but Kit slowed on the sidewalk while Bryony adjusted the strap of her bag, and she touched his elbow before they crossed the road.

Coralie let out a breath. She had managed not to give them advice. It had taken a surprising amount of restraint for somebody whose own wedding had failed to take place.


Stellan came by near closing time because they had arranged to go for a walk. He glanced at the empty fitting platform and asked how it had gone.

“The dress fits. She likes it.”

His smile was immediate. “Good.”

Coralie put the last appointment note away. He leaned against the doorframe, watching her lock the cabinet.

“She sounded a bit upset when she called,” he said.

Coralie turned. “Did she tell you why?”

“Kit. Speech. I didn’t get the whole thing.”

She waited.

“I was going to call him,” he added.

“Were you?”

He looked at his phone, then put it into his pocket. “He didn’t ask me to.”

Coralie picked up her keys.

“You can tell me I’m being interfering,” he said.

“I think you just told yourself.”

He gave her a rueful look. “That’s inconvenient.”

Outside, the air was warm enough that she left her cardigan in her bag. They walked without a destination at first, taking a side street because the main one was noisy. Stellan asked whether Bryony had seemed happy in the dress. Coralie told him about her walking across the room and looking back at the mirror. She did not repeat what had been said behind the curtain, or what Kit had admitted with his eyes on his hands.

“I’m glad,” Stellan said. “I wasn’t sure at first. About changing it.”

“I remember.”

“You were quite firm.”

“She was my client.”

“Yes.”

They stopped at a crossing. His hand found hers, and she looked down at their joined fingers while a car passed.

“I keep wanting to save her the hard bits,” he said. “Then I remember I couldn’t save her the actual hard bit.”

Coralie squeezed his hand. There was no useful answer she could give him on a sidewalk, and he did not seem to expect one.

On the other side of the road, he asked about her course. She told him she still had two days to wait. “Want to hear something stupid?” he asked. She did, so he described a customer who had requested a tree in a place where there was already a garage.

“Did they want the garage removed?”

“No.”

“Ambitious.”

“Very.”

They walked until her feet hurt, then sat on a low wall and watched people carry shopping home. It was not a particularly beautiful view. Stellan’s shoulder was warm against hers. She found she did not want to improve either thing.


At home, she tried on the blue dress.

Not the mockup this time. The actual fabric, partly assembled, with the shape she had chosen beginning to exist. She had expected the color to do its accustomed magic. Instead, the unfinished waist pulled sideways and the front hung unevenly. She stood in the bedroom looking at herself with both arms held clear, as though she had been caught committing a minor crime.

Then she laughed.

It was not graceful laughter. It was the sound that came when she had used up her day’s capacity for considering everything a verdict. She looked like a woman who had tried to get dressed during a small earthquake.

Her phone rang from the bed. Farah’s name appeared.

“I need an opinion,” Coralie said instead of hello.

“Dangerous.”

“It isn’t about a person.”

“Still dangerous.”

She sent the photograph. Farah went quiet, then made a noise that was almost certainly laughter being badly concealed.

“You can say it.”

“One side’s going somewhere the other side doesn’t want to go.”

“Yes.”

“Can you make them agree?”

“I think so.”

Farah asked whether she wanted company tomorrow. This time Coralie listened to the available hour before saying yes. She took the dress off, laid it carefully across the bed, and began to explain the problem aloud. Halfway through, the answer occurred to her.

“Stop,” she said.

“I wasn’t talking.”

“Sorry. I’ve got it.”

She made a note before the thought escaped. Farah waited, then asked if this meant she could bring her own pants for a quick opinion.

“No work,” Coralie said. “You can bring your terrible television recommendations.”

“Those are excellent. You just lack commitment.”

After they hung up, Coralie moved the dress from the bed to a hanger. There was a solution. It would take time, and a little unpicking, and the willingness to admit that the first idea had not been the best one.

She turned off the bedroom light without trying to fix it that night.